Our writing focus at the moment is Recounts
We have been learning to start our writing with a Bold Beginning.
Here are some excellent examples . . .
"Bowled him!" I shouted. (by Oscar)
"Everyone get under your desk!" shouted Miss Stewart (by Lile)
Gurgle, gurgle, gurgle! It couldn't be what I thought it was . . . (by Rachel)
"Aaaah, run for your lives!" a voice shouted. (by Dre)
It was scary but it had to be done . . . " (by Cyrus)
Do these beginnings grab your attention and make you want to read more???
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